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Make it an MMORPG. Flash MMO's are getting ALOT of traffic and it would be wise to take it into consideration.
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I really don't see why this is on the front page, it's not bad but it just lacks...everything really, there is no gameplay there is no story it's just a slideshow, got only knows what was restraining you from just posting it on deviantfail/the art section but this was just an overall waste of time. Yes you have a skill in drawing, by which I mean you are capable of drawing. You have adopted your own style and you are capable of basic proportion measurement and shape recognition, but I wouldn't say they were great, really neutral on this. Still no idea why this is even a flash let alone on the front page. They made an art section for a reason.
Author's Response:
I realize that this whole collection could have easily been posted into the art portal, but really, I only did this to practise with Flash. Otherwise, all of these sketches would never have seen the light of day, and I'd never have learned how to program clickable buttons. I didn't know it was going to get so much attention, and frankly you seem kind of bitter about the fact that it did..
Also, there's a reason that NG has "Games/Interactive" or "Movie" to submit under. If the art portal would allow Flash submissions, then I'd put it there, but it doesn't.
This isn't a movie, and it isn't a game, but it's obviously interactive, so that's why I ended up picking that category after not knowing what to submit it to.
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Another great video, seriously SERIOUSLY you need to expand your horizons with this, make a TV series pitch it to Adult Swim and climb the ladders from there, make it into an actual game and sell to sony or valve, climb the ladders from there.
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Okay heres how its going to go, I'm going to give a star for every pro instead of take away a star for every con like I usually do.
1. The graphics were very detailed, and well done. Nothing was hard to notice and wasn't annoyingly colored or weird, 1 star.
2. The story was crap, might as well of just make a sprite comic instead of a game, 0 stars.
3. The gameplay was good, and not over done, it didn't get boring for a long while either. 1 star.
4. The characters where shallow and pedantic. Its as if you really did just lift all the characters and story from a web comic. 0 stars.
5. The enemies weren't overly annoying but also provided a danger, 1 star.
6. The music was annoying but not awful, I'll give you a star for it.
7. The game save ability was nice as well as how the check points where in high numbers, 1 star.
8. The level up system was good but could use some minor work like the whole "LOL EVERYTHING WENT BACK TO LEVEL 1." thing, that was annoying. still 1 star.
9. The detail in everything but dialogue was good, the dialogue was just awful again it looks as if you ripped the story right out of a web comic. For the detail though 1 star.
10. The learning curve was good, and the gameplay had alot to do, it was a big game. 1 star.
To sum it all up, everything but the whole story was good. please seriously take into consideration that the story was awful however, for future reference.
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Cant save my char from THIS site. Gameplay is good graphics are good and its nice to see you finally fixed the animation delay. SUCKS THAT YOU THINK WE WOULD PAY TO PLAY THOUGH.
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new twist. Good job.
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It is very fun, and everything seems to be working out well. I think the only thing you need is to polish it up a bit.
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And it was the dr.octopus rip off.
The character artwork was horrible, but the animation was pretty good. There was only about 7 or 8 funny parts and everything else was just boring or it made me feel embarrassed to watch this. it had alot of potential and the animation was worth watching this for.
Author's Response:
7 or 8 funny parts is quite good going for a Flash cartoon.
Glad you liked the animation at least. And I'm sure Shard-Spider will be happy that you liked his voice acting.
Thanks for the review but there is no need to adopt such a spiteful tone in reviews. I know you probably didn't mean it but nobody is trying to hurt you. You don't need to be so defensive.
Thanks again!
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so whats stopping me from just redoing the graphics on the solitaire that I don't have to download on my computer?
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The Animation is your only score. The Voice Acting was terrible, and awfully recorded. And By Animation I don't mean art, all the artwork was is basics, just basics well done. The Story has been done so many times and you managed to make it worse by making it all DeviantArt styled, the bitch wins and nobody is the good guy, Wow how original. Seriously the only score you have here is on Animation, nothing else was good whatsoever about this.
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